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Post by Director Callahan on Nov 11, 2013 21:15:20 GMT -5
So with the first show in the books, I want to thank everyone who wrote matches (myself and Rebel -grin-) and everyone who contributed segments. Leave your feedback for the first show here but when doing so, consider the following questions;
Who was the MVP of the show?
Which was the match of the evening?
What do you think of the plans for the PURE Wrestling Heavyweight Championship?
What can be improved on for next time?
Congratulations to all the winners. If anyone wishes to know why they lost, fire me or Rebel a PM and we'll give you personal feedback on the results and give you pointers for how you can improve next time.
Thanks again for the support in the first week. Episode 2's card will go up tomorrow. Anyone who doesn't want booking, fire me a PM ASAP.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 11, 2013 21:39:00 GMT -5
So with the first show in the books, I want to thank everyone who wrote matches (myself and Rebel -grin-) and everyone who contributed segments. Leave your feedback for the first show here but when doing so, consider the following questions; Who was the MVP of the show?Which was the match of the evening?What do you think of the plans for the PURE Wrestling Heavyweight Championship?What can be improved on for next time?Congratulations to all the winners. If anyone wishes to know why they lost, fire me or Rebel a PM and we'll give you personal feedback on the results and give you pointers for how you can improve next time. Thanks again for the support in the first week. Episode 2's card will go up tomorrow. Anyone who doesn't want booking, fire me a PM ASAP. Excellent show. I did spot one line that I think came out wrong: "... Bartsch goes to grab her for a second attempt at putting the rookie through her paces but Scion throws a swift upkick to crack Barstch in his dome then finds herself vertical and hits a running dropkick that sends Scion flying shoulder first into the steel steps..."
Unless I'm reading that wrong, Scion just dropkicked herself? As for an MVP, I'd go with Parker, as, in my opinion, that would have been the hardest match to judge. I think that the Main Event was the most exciting match of the night, and I think it shows (as does the whole card) that the staff really have a good grasp of just who these characters are. I like the idea of an eventual 4-Way for the title as well. Great work. Keep it up.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 11, 2013 22:11:40 GMT -5
Who was the MVP of the show? DIAMOND LEGEND
Which was the match of the evening? "The Last King" Scott Wilson vs. "The Golden Boy" Jayson Garrett
What do you think of the plans for the PURE Wrestling Heavyweight Championship? Eh, it's a way to crown a champ. The way you built it up to me on Skype sounded fresher.
What can be improved on for next time? Shorter matches, revise matches (some things were confusing, like what Ash pointed out), and ditch color-coding entire paragraphs. I think coloring the name of the character speaking suffices.
RP of the Week: Jordan Caliban's "The Fear"
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Post by Madman on Nov 11, 2013 23:09:10 GMT -5
Who was the MVP of the show? Diamond Legend. For a guy who wasn't even booked in a match, you really did a bang up job with the segments to get your character out there and noticed! You played the heel role perfectly, building some heat on your character.
Which was the match of the evening? Ash Scion versus APB. Both put out quality role plays this week and the match didn't disappoint the main event booking! Ash is looking like a lock for this planned four way dance for the Heavyweight championship!
What do you think of the plans for the PURE Wrestling Heavyweight Championship? It's a different angle. Most places are quick to throw a tournament together, which I understand because it gives everyone a chance to get involved. My only critique would have been that with the major announcement, Callahan could have announced the first match for next week during his opening promo.
What can be improved on for next time? Share the workload! I know Rebel and Callahan wanted to set a precedent for the results but taking a large load of match writing is a surefire way to burn out. Other than that, as we all start working with one another, more intriguing segments will start to churn out, providing for great shows!
Role play of the week? Aubrey J. Parker - Hyperactivity...Damn you Evan! Once I saw I drew you and Hopkins in the opening week I knew I was doomed! Great reads, both of you guys, but Evan has picked up where Aubrey J. Parker left off in APW. Watch out, I think I know who I'm putting money on to be the first PURE Heavyweight Champion(Kind of funny seeing as its a female character).
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Post by Director Callahan on Nov 11, 2013 23:51:39 GMT -5
What do you think of the plans for the PURE Wrestling Heavyweight Championship? It's a different angle. Most places are quick to throw a tournament together, which I understand because it gives everyone a chance to get involved. My only critique would have been that with the major announcement, Callahan could have announced the first match for next week during his opening promo. With the whole premise being that candidates for qualifying are selected on the basis of who creates the biggest waves, who looks impressive, who picks up wins etc., to select people for next week's qualifier before even the first match would make no sense at all. Also, we'll be shortening and offering matches out to people next week.
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Post by Diamond Legend on Nov 12, 2013 0:20:42 GMT -5
Who was the MVP of the show? For me it'd be AJP for a nice win in a stiff match. Nice work from all those guys, but nice job to everyone.
Which was the match of the evening? I'd go with the Triple Threat, followed closely behind Maverick v Bailey because of the great face comeback win.
What do you think of the plans for the PURE Wrestling Heavyweight Championship? Very swell idea. It's going to be nice to see who gets picked over the weeks. Plus I like what it's based off.
What can be improved on for next time? Hmmm, more segs for me....
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Post by Maverick on Nov 12, 2013 0:32:26 GMT -5
TOO MUCH DIAMOND LEGEND AHHHHHHHHHH
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Post by Diamond Legend on Nov 12, 2013 0:39:26 GMT -5
LMAO, That was actually nothing.....five segs for ep 2.
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Post by Madman on Nov 12, 2013 0:39:50 GMT -5
What do you think of the plans for the PURE Wrestling Heavyweight Championship? It's a different angle. Most places are quick to throw a tournament together, which I understand because it gives everyone a chance to get involved. My only critique would have been that with the major announcement, Callahan could have announced the first match for next week during his opening promo. With the whole premise being that candidates for qualifying are selected on the basis of who creates the biggest waves, who looks impressive, who picks up wins etc., to select people for next week's qualifier before even the first match would make no sense at all. Also, we'll be shortening and offering matches out to people next week. True but it could have been to the effect of winner of match A is facing winner of match B
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Post by Director Callahan on Nov 12, 2013 0:54:35 GMT -5
With the whole premise being that candidates for qualifying are selected on the basis of who creates the biggest waves, who looks impressive, who picks up wins etc., to select people for next week's qualifier before even the first match would make no sense at all. Also, we'll be shortening and offering matches out to people next week. True but it could have been to the effect of winner of match A is facing winner of match B But that doesn't include making waves/being impressive. Besides, that won't work. You'll see why.
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Post by Director Callahan on Nov 12, 2013 2:32:14 GMT -5
LMAO, That was actually nothing.....five segs for ep 2. It's great that you're enthusiastic but please, don't burn yourself out and don't overexposed yourself on shows. No more than two appearances next ep.
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Post by Anthony Bailey on Nov 12, 2013 13:28:27 GMT -5
There was a minor error in my entrance on my PURE app that is now fixed. I had my old theme song from APW instead of my new one lol.
Will leave feedback later.
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Post by Diamond Legend on Nov 12, 2013 13:39:56 GMT -5
LMAO, That was actually nothing.....five segs for ep 2. It's great that you're enthusiastic but please, don't burn yourself out and don't overexposed yourself on shows. No more than two appearances next ep. Lol, i was kidding brotha.
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Post by Johnny Rebel on Nov 12, 2013 13:44:06 GMT -5
Thanks for the feedback all.
I think in the future we'll shift to more of a summarized results on TV and full-blown written results for the major events/PPV.
I was incredibly pleased with the turnout for this weeks PURE TV. I'll tell you that Callahan and I didn't agree on some of the judging - it was THAT hard to pick winners. There were a few matches that I was reading through roleplays and thought "nobody is going to top that" and they did.
Congrats to all of you for putting forth a tremendous effort. Nowhere to go but up!
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Post by jordancaliban on Nov 12, 2013 17:21:01 GMT -5
I really wasn't expecting to win that one, thanks for the honour of being the first match winner the company ever had as for the writing crew, you guys did a stellar job and I hope next week I will get to work on the show with you guys match wise
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